Matt P. Lamparter

You still need to go back and take screenshots. Never take a photo of a computer screen.

You should highlight that you are using a "Job Origin" of left center as opposed to the more typical left top (these are selected via the nine radio buttons). You are also using a "start from" value of "user origin". These parameter are shown in your second image but not highlighted or mentioned in the bullet points. This may need to be a different step since it is imperative that users make these selections.

All of my previous comments from October still need to be addressed.

Add an arrow in your second image to indicate where you want the red laser pointer dot.

Give an example here of dimensions you would use. From your image it looks like the height of the rectangle would be 3". Show how you would calculate the width of the rectangle.

Bullet point one should reference the first image. Change your circle color to something other than black to make it more obvious. Explain that the "left side starting point" is the black dot on the rotary chuck clamp arm.

Explain that the user will need to move/adjust the tumbler back and forth a bit and continue to test moving the red laser dot until it hits both black marker dots. Don't just copy the text that was provided as a suggestion; write your own text that makes sense to a maker using this tutorial.

This is mildly confusing since it is redundant with Steps 5-7. You might want to show a video of moving the left/right arrows to rotate the tumbler.

Still need to address the previous comment regarding showing a picture and letting folks know where to find calipers or a ruler.

The text here is confusing and not relevant. This guide is specifically showing you how to engrave a tumbler, so make this text specific to that task. Inform users they will need to bring their own tumbler.

Title is still too long. Also, please change the text around the video link in the Intro at the top of the tutorial.

Go ahead and add a photo here and emphasize that cleaning up means using dish soap and the dish cloth to clean the jug, frothing whisk, and any spillage. Without soap the milk jug will eventually build up gunk.

And I like to have some explicit steps to take about cleaning up spills, etc. in the clean up step so I can point to those when I hold folks accountable.